don’t tell anybody
about this place
the woman said
but i can’t
resist the temptation
vision of paradise
heaven on earth
in her eyes
somewhere to rest
body mind spirit
safe haven beneath
clear blue skies
November 9, 2014
beyond mere words
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Lorem Ipsum's personal mantra is that it never works to resort to wearing resort wear to work, unless one works at a resort where the wearing of resort wear is what works best of all, and is no way a last resort of any sort.Recent Comments
Missing Zero 
November 10th, 2014 at 6:46 pm
i like this, good rhythm! 🙂
November 11th, 2014 at 7:30 am
Thanks, it’s a bit of numerology in action, being all based around the number 3. Three word title, three words per line, three lines per stanza. And although four stanzas, 39 words all up, including title (or 3+9=12, 12=1+2, which equals 3 again) Phew! 🙂